The Story of Lucifer. Chapter Three: Hard Work (NOT about satan)Updates Saturday

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Stealthy Killington I

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Re: The Story of Lucifer. Chapter one: The Boy (NOT about satan.)

« on: March 26, 2009, 09:24:59 pm »

Yeah, a bit longer could be done. I really don't get a feel for what the characters are like. Try to incorporate some description of some sort.


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