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« on: April 06, 2009, 03:27:41 pm »

So I'm writing a short story which is basically about a robot that destroys most of the human race, I've got him characterized pretty well. But my problem are the human survivors. There's this group of survivors, and in the group is a couple. I've never been in a relationship you see so I have no idea what the heck is supposed to happen. I wrote around sex scenes by making it implied that he got her pregnant already (repopulation) and that he believes only screwing is only for making babies. Since this is a short story and since the focus of the story is on the robot, I don't need to go into too much detail on their relationship, as it's quite short-lived by the intended length of my story.  Still I'm having a rough time with this subject, I would really appreciate any help you can offer.

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« Reply #1 on: April 06, 2009, 03:33:30 pm »

You wrote AROUND the sex scenes? Wow Pankey. No offense, but you're one of the last people I'd think would do that.
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« Reply #2 on: April 06, 2009, 03:37:37 pm »

Yeah, I'm pretty surprised too.
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« Reply #3 on: April 07, 2009, 12:08:59 am »

By "AROUND" the sex scenes, that doesn't mean you put much details on the sex scene itself?
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« Reply #4 on: April 07, 2009, 06:35:56 am »

Essentialy.
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« Reply #5 on: April 25, 2009, 04:50:37 pm »

Relationship stuff is incredibly easy to write, but impossible to teach how to write. Sorry. If you send me the part you're stuck on, I can give you a few suggestions.
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« Reply #6 on: April 25, 2009, 06:07:06 pm »

Do you want it to be like a married couple sex?
I mean... I know college hook ups...
So...
I could give you that...
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« Reply #7 on: April 25, 2009, 08:34:14 pm »

Do you just need to write about the sex scenes or the actual relationship?
Cause I could help you write both probably :3

I donno, it just revolves a lot around the feeling I suppose =P. I know how strongly I felt when I was in a relationship... so maybe talk about that? :3
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